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There are different opinions among people as to 省略.Some people suggest that 省略.


There is an old saying省略.It is the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.


Today,省略,which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First,省略,Second,省略.What makes things worse is that 省略.


Nowadays,it is common to 省略.Many people like 省略because省略.Besides,省略.


Everything has two sides and 省略is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.


People's opinions about 省略vary from person to person.Some people say that 省略.To them,省略.


Man is now facing a big problem省略which is becoming more and more serious.


省略has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.


省略has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.


According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages/ in the chart/bar graph/line/graph, it can be seen that省略.Obviously,省略,but why?



    一提到四级作文的结尾部分,all in allin conclusion等句式就欢乐地冒了出来熟不知阅卷老师的审美又遭遇了千篇一律的轰炸,这时就需要一些可以刺激他审美的万能句型呢!

1) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that …从以上的讨论我们可以肯定地得出结论,即

2) Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论

3) Overall, there is compelling evidence that …, and it follows that in this respect …总的说来,令人信服的证据是,而且在这方面随之而来的是

4) The analysis we have made leads to a sound idea that …由我们的分析得出一个正确的见解,即

5) Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论

6) Therefore, we can reach the following conclusion … 因此,我们可以得出这样的结论

7) The evidence upon all sides leads to a just conclusion that …基于各方面证据,就产生这样一个公正的结论。

8) All the analysis justifies an unshakable view that …所有分析证实了一个不可动摇的观点,即

9) All reliable evidence points to the fact that …所有可靠的证据都表明这一事实

10) All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that …所有的证据都支持一个毫无疑问的结论




    作文第一段:介绍现象3句,主题句(时间+事件+地点) + 支撑句(数据or 举例 or 两者结合) + 自然收尾(第三句若没有把握,也可酌情省略)

时间:当前,最近 RecentlyPresentlyCurrentlyNowadays

过去,Over/In the past decades , In the past  (此时的事件里可用 used to do

事件:好事:受到青睐。XXX has gained more and more popularity

坏事:引起关注。XXX has aroused more and more people's concern

the phenomenon that ...  has aroused more and more people's concern

中性:成为普遍现象 XXX has become a very common phenomenon

地点、人物:在国内大学里  at domestic universities and colleges

在人们的日常生活里 in people‘s daily life

在我们的社会里  in our society

在青年人中 among young people   在家长中间 among parents

尤其是白领和大学生  especially white collars and college students

数据支撑:根据最新的一个调查 According to a latest survey

根据一个最新的在1000名大学生中所做的调查 According to a latest survey of 1000 college students

相关数据显示:Related statistics show that ...

举例支撑:XXX 涵盖了很多方面,从…………

It covers a lot of aspects ranging from ... to ...

其他备用表达:各种各样的,a variety ofa diversity of 一系列,a series of 丰富大量的,an abundance of 包含很多方面,aspects 领域 fields 给人们提供了很多方便和娱乐 provide a lot of convenience and entertainment for us.   … 在人们的生活中占据重要的地位 play a profoundly important role in people's life



(时间)Recently,(事件)XXXuniversity rankings have gained more and more popularity (地点)in our societyespecially among parents and high school students. 

(举例法)These rankings cover a variety of aspects ranging from teaching facilities to the job prospects of graduates.

(数据法)According to a latest survey in 1000 parents, around 80% of them say they would take related rankings into consideration before they decide which school their children should enter.



More and more parents are allowing their pre-teen children to join social media platforms despite age restriction and danger of being exposed to objectionable content. According to a poll of 1,000 adults conducted by Liberty Mutual's Responsibility Project, around 17 percent of parents claimed that they had no problem with their pre-teen child using social media platforms, compared to 8 percent of the parents a year ago.


    第二段:分析原因,利弊(6-7句,主题句 + 观点1 + 支撑 + 观点2 + 支撑。也可酌情写三个观点)

1. “某人做某事是出于以下三个原因。(真题:学生不重视拼写的原因,学生出于不同的原因选择选修课)



1.  People do sth for the following three reasons. First, Second, Third (Last but not the least)

Students would take the following three factors into consideration when they…

We can benefit a lot from … First, it has a positive influence on our study. It helps us broaden/widen our horizon, enrich our life and knowledge, lay a solid foundation for our future work, make our college life more colorful and wonderful, helps to improve people’s work efficiency. Second, we can have opportunities / chances to contact and communicate with others and improve our social skills.promote strengthen enhance

2. ****可能会引起一些列的问题。(预测:过度上网可能引起一些列的问题。)

首先,它对我们的健康有极其不好的影响(威胁到我们的健康)。其次,它影响我们的效率,让我们无法集中精力在工作和学习上。再次,它影响了我们和他人交际的能力。(这里只有主题 + 观点123,没有支撑的部分,大家自己酌情补充)

***may cause a series of problems. ***may give rise to a series of unpleasant / undesirable consequences. First, it has an extremely negative effect on our health, both physical and mental.threaten Second, it affects our efficiency and make us fail to concentrate on our work and study. Third (Last but not the least,) it undermines our ability to communicate with others.

3. 任何事物都有两面性,****也不例外。(或者:***是一把双刃剑,它既有好处,也有坏处)一方面(好处,有助于),另一方面(坏处,影响了)

Everything has two sides —— *** is no exception. *** is a double-edged sword ---- it has both advantages and disadvantages.(---- it can be both a blessing and a curse.) On the one hand, …. On the other hand,…



1. 就我个人来说,我认为我们应该用一个理性的态度来对待****。我们要分清它的好处和坏处,合理的利用它。我们在做某事之前,要考虑它的好坏两个方面。

Personallyin my view, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, I suggest that we should have a rational attitude to … we need to distinguish between its advantages and disadvantagesWe should take both its positive and negative sides into consideration before we do sth.

2. 为了改变这个局面,我们必须采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。(鉴于它的影响,我们必须找到解决的方案)


To change this situation, we must take some effective measures and actions to solve the problem.

(Considering its bad influence, we must find some solutions to it.)

(To solve the problem needs the joint efforts of both school and students. On the one hand, school should establish a system or make some rules and regulations to punish / prevent … On the other hand, students should raise their awareness of honesty and self-control